Hello! How are you today?
I can't understand "thesis statement" too and I don't know how to correct my second draft... But I will try writing final draft on weekend because I have no time to do that.
By the way, I don't know "Rakeru" though I often go to machida. where is the restaurant? Maybe you are surprised, I have never eaten オムライス. So I can't imagine ケチャップライス. However, everyone around me say オムライス is very delicious. So I want to try eating it someday^^
